Get detailed feedback on your song's lyrics, learn how to revise them, and gain the confidence to step in front of an audience to promote your songs and actually start making money.


Finally! How To revise your lyrics so that they are powerful, engaging, unique, and interesting.

(So you DON'T have to let go of your beautiful vision.)

 

Are you an aspiring songwriter who is afraid that the lyrics you write aren't good enough? ...

Do you stand in your own way because you fear what you write will leave you disappointed in yourself ...

And doubt if you got what it takes to write catchy and original lyrics?

Do you struggle with a lack of self-confidence that stops you from going out there and promoting your songs?

You know, it does not have to be this way.

 

If you want to ...

  • know exactly what to focus on when you revise your lyrics so that your words get the message across and convey emotion,
  • translate the message and the idea behind the lyrics so that your audience can connect with you,
  • or even if you just want to believe in yourself to have the courage to confidently promote your song

... then this is the best opportunity for you to level up your lyric writing skills.

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Imagine how great it would be if you ...

  • Get the very first words of your lyrics right so that they are engaging enough to catch people's attention and make them listen to your song!

  • Could take something that is meaningful to you and write it so that many people will be able to relate to it.

  • Gain confidence by knowing what you write is good enough so that you don't need to suffer from self-inflicted criticism and have the courage to go out and promote your songs.

And here's what enables you to achieve what you want to achieve:

Leveling up your lyrics will give you a clear path on how to revise them to make them more captivating, and boost your confidence to start promoting your songs!

 

The feedback is going to give you everything you need to revise your lyrics successfully to make them undeniably catchy and interesting.

This tool is designed to give you specific feedback on your lyrics PLUS the exact steps to increase their storytelling power so that you not only hook your audience and keep them engaged, but also to get your message across and convey emotion.

Here's how and why I can make you this promise...

Melanie NaumannMy name is Melanie Naumann and I've worked for years as an editor for writers, honing my understanding of the craft of storytelling through numerous courses, seminars, and dozens of writing guides.

My focus, however, is on taking song lyrics to a new, more meaningful, and gripping level through the power of storytelling.

I am the only Story Grid certified editor who works as a songwriting coach for songwriters.
In my podcast, I analyze songs according to storytelling principles and talk about how important storytelling is in songwriting.

Furthermore, I am the creator of the Uniqueness Factor Formula (a way to help established musicians write another bestselling album by leveraging what their fans love the most about their lyrics) as well as of the S.O.N.G. framework to evaluate the storytelling power of lyrics.

So if you're looking for someone to help you write lyrics that speak to and engage people, I look forward to hearing from you!

 

In Fact, Here's Just The Tip of The Iceberg of What You Get...

  • You'll gain the confidence to step in front of an audience to promote your songs and actually start making money.
  • You'll start believing in yourself as a songwriter and will have the courage to say: "Check out my music!"
  • You'll stop procrastinating, stay focused and actually finish revising your song's lyrics.
  • You'll know exactly how to avoid lazy lyrics, aimless themes, and bad phrasing so that you don't need to worry anymore how to level up your lyric writing skills.
  • You'll be able to write songs that other people actually listen to and like a lot and leaving behind the days of feeling unappreciated or not being heard.

What's Included?


#1 – Detailed feedback on your song's lyrics that will show you the strengths and weaknesses of your lyrics' storytelling power.
#1 – Detailed feedback on your song's lyrics that will show you the strengths and weaknesses of your lyrics' storytelling power.

Following the S.O.N.G. framework, I'll analyze the storytelling power of your lyrics to help you understand what works, what does not, and how you can improve the lyrics by using the craft of storytelling.

#2 – A step-by-step plan on how you can start revising your lyrics so that you don't lose focus.
#2 – A step-by-step plan on how you can start revising your lyrics so that you don't lose focus.

I'll provide you with specific advice and possibilities to improve your writing and level up your lyrics. You get a clear step-by-step plan on how you can start revising your lyrics so that you get your message across, convey emotion, and hook your listeners right from the start of your song. These steps will be prescriptive and actionable, allowing you to focus on revising rather than worrying about what to do next.

#3 – Lyric suggestions to help you get inspired when you revise your lyrics so that you be able to get started right away without falling into writer's block.
#3 – Lyric suggestions to help you get inspired when you revise your lyrics so that you be able to get started right away without falling into writer's block.

You'll not only get feedback on your lyrics, and a plan on how to improve them, but I'll also provide lyric suggestions to help you get started on revising and using the power of storytelling. Those suggestions are free and you can use them to your choosing.


Your advantage: you increase your lyric writing skills through using the power of storytelling to start making a difference in your songwriting career.

 

If you write catchy, unique, and memorable lyrics you will be heard! People will start listening to your songs and make them their own because you speak to their hearts and souls.

 

That's how it could be:

  • When you revise your lyrics that you care about a lot, think about how good you'll feel about yourself when you realize you've stayed true to yourself in the process WITHOUT selling out.

  • When you learn how to revise your lyrics, think about how you can let go of negative judgments (most often self-inflicted) that took away the best of you.

  • See yourself promoting your songs confidently because you know what you wrote is so damn good that it needs to be heard.

Your achievement:

You get detailed feedback on your song's lyrics as well as a clear step-by-step plan on how you can start revising them, PLUS personalized lyric suggestions to help you get inspired.

I'm in! What do I invest in my future?

Pricing is based on the amount of support you need. Please read through each plan carefully and choose the option that works best for you.

Standard

delivered within 7 days


specific feedback on your lyrics to know its strength and weaknesses
for the value of 1.000 €

"next-steps" recommendation letter for improving the lyrics' storytelling power 
for the value of 800 €

lyric suggestions (free to use)
for the value of 500 €


Value:

2.300,-€

You get it for:

230,-€
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Pro

delivered within 7 days


everything from the standard tier

+ a 60min coaching call with me to discuss my feedback and your next steps so that you feel confident moving forward with your work
for the value of 500 €

+ feedback on your revised lyrics so that you can make sure your lyrics are to the point of what you wanted to say
for the value of 1.000 €


Value:

3.800,-€

You get it for:

380,-€
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Non binding request

My guarantee to you

I guarantee that only me – the creator of the Uniqueness Factor Formula and the S.O.N.G. framework and the worldwide only certified Story Grid editor who specializes in storytelling in songwriting – will analyze your song's lyrics. You are getting a clear to follow implementation guide so you don't have to worry about all the analytical work behind the analysis. And I will always speak to you in plain English. 

If I don't live up to any of these promises, I insist that you tell me and you'll get one song for free analyzed.

This is PERFECT for you if:

  • You are an aspiring songwriter who wants to grow as an artist.
  • You struggles with not knowing if your lyrics are good enough.
  • You want to take your songwriting to the next level and are willing to do the work.
  • You understand that investing in professional feedback is the key to becoming a better songwriter.

This is NOT for you if:

  • You are looking for help with music, melody or putting the lyrics to the melody. Feedback about music theory is not included.
  • You can't accept feedback or constructive criticism on your songwriting.


If you are still not sure,

feel free to book a free strategy call with me. If there's no date available, please send me an email to write[at]storiesinsongs.com and include some time suggestions, and I'll get back to you.

Here's how we do it:

1. Apply for working together using the contact form below.

2. Send me the lyrics of the song.

3. Allow me to create a customized plan for you.

4. Revolutionize your songwriting.

Use your chance and let's work together:

Fill out the form and I'll get back to you with further information on working together.


I agree that my data may be processed for the purpose of requesting to work with Melanie Naumann and I accept the privacy policy.

Don't let this chance slip to boost your songwriting skills!

Every minute you wait is another minute you spend too long in your comfort zone making it harder and harder to open up for constructive criticism that will help you grow as an artist.

Did you know 9 out of 10 aspriring songwriters ask for feedback from other songwriters who struggle with the same problems and don't actually have a solution?

Many songwriters post their lyrics in social media groups looking for confirmation that their lyrics are either good enough or hope for some feedback that will help them level up their craft. But if you want to be taken seriously, you have to ask the right people who give you the right answers in how you can level up your songwriting game.

So go ahead and click the order link now and you'll be on your way to enjoying all the benefits we've talked about here and more! Let's get started right now!

P.S. - Every minute you wait is another day worrying about how to write a captivating song. Take action now and get professional feedback on your lyrics.

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Here's a reminder of what you'll get:

  1. Detailed feedback on your song's lyrics that will show you the strengths and weaknesses of your lyrics' storytelling power.
  2. A step-by-step plan on how you can start revising your lyrics so that you don't lose focus.
  3. Lyric suggestions to help you get inspired when you revise your lyrics so that you be able to get started right away without falling into writer's block.
  4. Optional: A coaching call with me to discuss my feedback and your next steps so that you feel confident moving forward with your work.

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