Lyric Feedback and Review

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Would You Like To Get My Help To Move Forward, Solve Problems, or Get Actionable Feedback on Your Lyrics?

Get The Same Personal Intensive “Lyric Revision” Coaching That Has Inspired Artists To Write An Entire Album.

LEVELING UP.

Finally! No more wondering if the lyrics are good enough. Get feedback on your lyrics to find out what works, what does not, and how you can improve them.

Have you written your song lyrics, but you fear that they aren't good enough?

Constantly wondering if people will be able to relate to them... or even want to listen to the song?

Perhaps all this wondering made you question yourself and doubt if you have what it takes to write catchy and original lyrics.

Or maybe you know you have something there, but you're looking for the final tweaks to make the lyrics the best they can be.

Or you're here because you face a problem and just want it solved.

If that's you, welcome to Lyric Mastery!

IS THAT YOU?

Do You Want to...

... know exactly what to focus on when you revise your lyrics so that your words get the message across, touch your listeners' hearts, and are meaningful to them.

... translate the message and the idea behind the lyrics so that your audience can connect with you and your song's main character, and loves to be taken on a journey.

... feel more confident in your songwriting and know your strengths and weaknesses so you can focus on improving your skills.

LET ME BE HONEST WITH YOU...

Writing a First Lyric Draft is one thing... Revising Your Lyrics To Unleash Their Power Is Another...

So here's what you can do:

Option 1: Do It Yourself

You still have to do the strategy and the heavy lifting. Do everything yourself.

You have to go through your lyrics step-by-step, check all the important criteria, find out what's working, what's not, what needs improving, and figure out how you can improve it... and all of this without real certainty if you are on the right track...

Option 2: Ask Friends and Family for Feedback

You can show your lyrics to some people and get various opinions.

Pass your lyrics on to someone you trust. At best, you get solid feedback about what someone liked or didn't like about them.

Unfortunately, it will be hard to figure out WHAT led to someone liking or not liking your lyrics and HOW you can improve it. So all you'll probably end up with are some good guesses but even more insecurity about what to do.

- OR -

Option 3: Let me do it for you.

Leverage my expertise and experience to revise your lyrics and tell you exactly how you can truly level up your lyrics so that they have the power to hook, engage, and captivate your audience to make an impact!

Includes

Global Concept, Coherence, Understanding, Content Genre Conventions and Obligatory Moments, Audience Expectations
Song's Main Character, Point of View, Objects of Desire, Empathy/Sympathy
Song's Narrative and the Song's Main Character's Journey
Intrigue, Engagement
Song's Message & Takeaway

Does Not include

Lyric Form and Structure
Rhyming, Rhythm
Music, Melody, Composition
Writing Style and Literary Devices

This service is meant for songs that are supposed to deliver a meaningful message. The ones that 'go somewhere' and have a shift in their narrative.

So it does not work with simple feel-good songs, feel-so-bad songs, or dance songs where it's all about one feeling that does not change.

Just Imagine ...

HOW AWESOME WOULD IT BE IF YOU COULD CALL ME UP AND LET ME DO YOUR LYRIC REVISION FOR YOU IN ABOUT 60 MINUTES ...

INTRODUCING

1:1 Coaching Lyric Feedback

From Melanie Naumann

Option #1

45min Lyric Review Video Recording

Detailed feedback on your song's lyrics that will show you the strengths and weaknesses of your lyrics. Following my 4-step Revision framework, I'll analyze the power of your lyrics to help you understand what works, what does not, and how you can improve your lyrics.

Yes, I want this.

Option #2

1:1 Coaching & Lyric Feedback

Get the 45-minute Lyric Review Video Recording, plus ...

A step-by-step plan on how to start rewriting your lyrics. I'll provide advice and possibilities to improve your lyrics. You get a clear step-by-step plan on how to start rewriting your lyrics to get your message across, convey emotion, and hook your listeners with your song's first line. These steps will be prescriptive and actionable, allowing you to focus on rewriting rather than worrying about what to do next.
A 45-min 1:1 Follow-up Coaching Call so you can ask your questions, brainstorm ideas, and move forward with clarity and intention
Downloadable Recording of our Entire Meeting
Lyric Review Video Recording of your Revised Lyric Draft so you know how well you've applied the feedback and discover final tweaks to make your lyrics even more powerful.

189

Yes, I want all of this.

Option #3

Alternatively ...

You can also jump on a 30-minute problem-solving call with me to tackle any question.

Do you have an important question or something you struggle with? And you'd like to talk it through? That's okay, you can book a 30-minute call with me so you can move forward. (Does not include Feedback on Lyrics)

Yes, I want this.

IMAGINE THIS:

Imagine what your life will be like when you can have your lyrics ready as fast as possible with my help and coaching.

And you know that your lyrics will...

Hook Your Audience With Their First Line
Create a Coherent Listening Experience that satisfies your audience's expectations without creating confusion
Keep Your Audience Engaged from Beginning to End
Make Your Audience Identify With Your Song's Main Character
Tell a Captivating Story that Takes Your Audience along for the Ride
Deliver A Meaningful Message that has the Power To Make An Impact On Your Audience

And the best thing is...

No more self-doubt if your lyrics are any good. You will know that your words are as powerful as they could be. And you will confidently step up and be ready to make an impact!

Melanie Naumann

Melanie Naumann is an Independent Consultant for Record Companies and Music Artists, as well as a Certified Story Grid Editor, author, and Lyric Advisor.

She dissected hundreds of song lyrics, studying the craft of storytelling in songwriting. And discovered why some songs fade away while others stay with us for decades or even become the anthem of an entire generation.

It's her calling to help music artists write lyrics that have the power to make an emotional impact on someone's life through the power of storytelling that makes the ART of writing lyrics - lyrics that create an emotional connection with the listener and let you, as the songwriter, communicate what matters to you so that it resonates with your audience, and with that - leave your legacy.

Please choose your Next Step.

Problem-Solving Call

Do you have an important question or something you struggle with? And you'd like to talk it through? That's okay, you can book a 30-minute call with me so we can get you unstuck.

45min Lyric Review Video Recording

Detailed feedback on your song's lyrics that will show you the strengths and weaknesses of your lyrics. Following my 4-step Revision framework, I'll analyze the power of your lyrics to help you understand what works, what does not, and how you can improve your lyrics.

1:1 Coaching & Lyric Feedback

Get the 45-minute Lyric Review Video Recording, plus ...

A step-by-step plan on how to start rewriting your lyrics so you don't lose focus. I'll provide advice and possibilities to improve your lyrics. You get a clear step-by-step plan on how to start rewriting your lyrics to get your message across, convey emotion, and hook your listeners with your song's first line. These steps will be prescriptive and actionable, allowing you to focus on rewriting rather than worrying about what to do next.
A 45-min 1:1 Follow-up Coaching Call so you can ask your questions, brainstorm ideas, and move forward with clarity and intention
Downloadable Recording of our Entire Meeting
Lyric Review Video Recording of your Revised Lyric Draft so you know how well you've applied the feedback and discover final tweaks to make your lyrics even more powerful.

189

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Yes, I want the video transcripts too.

Please check the box above if you would like to get the transcripts of the video review of your lyrics for an additional $9.

EARNINGS DISCLAIMER: I don't believe in "the perfect lyric" formula - only in the power of storytelling, adding value, building a true and meaningful message, and serving others with excellence and providing a great listening experience. My programs are intended to help you share your message with a wider audience and to make a difference in the world while leveling up your lyric writing craft. My programs take a lot of work and discipline just like any worthwhile endeavor or professional continuing education program. Please don't enroll in my programs if you believe in the "lyrics are dead" myth; I only want serious people dedicated to real professional development who want to add value and move humanity forward. As stipulated by law, we can not and do not make any guarantees about your ability to get results or earn any money with my ideas, information, tools or strategies. I don't know you and, besides, your results in life are up to you. Agreed? I just want to help by giving great content, direction, and strategies. What I can guarantee is your satisfaction; I give you a 30-day 100% satisfaction guarantee, so if you are not happy for any reason with the quality of my training, just ask for your money back. You should know that all products and services by my company are for educational and informational purposes only. Nothing on this page, any of our websites, or any of our content or curriculum is a promise or guarantee of results or future earnings, and I do not offer any legal, medical, tax or other professional advice. Any numbers or claims referenced here, or on any of our sites, are illustrative of concepts only and should not be considered average stats, exact stats, or promises for actual or future performance. Making decisions based on any information presented in my products, events, services, or web site, should be done only with the knowledge that you could experience risk or losses or setbacks just like any personal or carreer endeavor. Use caution and always consult your manager, band members, or professional advisor before acting on this or any information related to a change of your lyric writing style. You alone are responsible and accountable for your decisions, actions and results in life, and by your registration here you agree not to attempt to hold me liable for your decisions, actions or results, at any time, under any circumstance. Anyway, all of my terms, privacy policies and disclaimers for this program and website can be accessed via the link above. It's basic stuff -- don't think you're guaranteed to write hit songs easily or at all -- but I feel transparency is important, and I hold myself (and you) to an incredibly high standard of integrity. That's why I also put my disclaimers on all my pages, why I give you my contact information for any questions, and why I give you a 100% satisfaction guarantee. Thanks for reading this. Until next time. Now go make a difference today.

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